Khamis, 18 Oktober 2007

Rilek Relic Relax Realaxe Raelix

The winter storms returned
to the palace by the bay,
was it not that season
for me to go away?
selam ke salam
salam selam

4 ulasan:

inah berkata...

salams..besh la poetry..short and sincere =)..

maddie berkata...

i like this.
very very much

"the Dude" berkata...

inah, hehe, maybe next poem going to be long and insincere, i never know lah. ;P

maddie, i like your new poem too, grey-shaded rainbows reminds me of here during the long rainy season, when sunshine becomes precious. :)

Sarah Mohd Shukor berkata...

poetic man.
it lives!
like it. like it.